are these the brothers from the summer i turned pretty

they’re so cute, I think you’re gonna love part 3! hopefully very soon, I’m workin on it rn!

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LMAO THATS FR SO ACCURATE TBH

not at all overthinking things, I’m actually so happy you asked, thank you!!

so, here’s the thing: feedback makes me so so happy! sometimes it’s a small comment, sometimes it’s a big one! personally, I love comments and reblogs most. I try my be at to reply to every single comment, even if it’s just an emoji!

but, I always love to see the big feedbacks on reblogs! sometimes people love stuff so much they use images or quotes from my fics and use paragraphs, and I love to reblog those pieces of feedback!!

so, without sounding too picky, smaller feedback I prefer as comments and bigger ones as reblogs!

all feedback, big or small, makes my day every single time!! this is just my personal presence, but I don’t expect anyone to stick to it, whatever people want to do makes me happy! just seeing a written response to something I wrote in any possibly way makes me so unbelievably happy!

thank you so much for asking, never ever feel worried or doubtful for asking questions like this, I’m always happy to answer them!

no you’re so fr for this though 💀 lucien and feyre could have had such a pure friendship and she even threaded sexual tension into their relationship unnecessarily 😩 not like insane heaps, but y’know.

also, nesta and az had SUCH potential for a real deep friendship and she had to make nesta thirst for az. for what?? like okay, I get that everyone wanted that threesome scene, but really, was there any need to thread that in? az could have been such a good friend for her, az could have really helped heal that trauma given the chance, and honestly it really ruined part of nesta’s development for me too. like if I had seen her develop her first real, deep friendship she’s EVER HAD with az before even the Valkyries came along, that would have meant so much to me. instead it just portrayed her as desperate and horny. like?? why?? don’t you want us to like her? why not give her the first friend she’s ever made that was purely her choice, someone to trust, rely on. instead it was like “nesta wants to fuck yet another male”. why. why have you done this to her?

YES so, dorian did not fucking flinch at all, he was so happy with both and I think that is so important and was basically just brushed over. which is annoying, because in her own POV chapters, she thinks nobody accepts her.

there was so much potential for some really moving chapters between her and dorian. imagine the friendly cuddles when she’s upset because she feels lost? imagine finding their way together as lost and crownless royals? the support system potential? the dealing with trauma, her talking him through the deaths, the killing, how to cope? like so much was just lost to us 😭

I do love rowan & aelin 🤌🏻

manon is… there. I don’t not like her but I am undecided right now! like, I get it, she was basically brainwashed into being a killer and all, it just feels like I need to see more of her development before I can say I love her. she has potential to be one of my faves, let me put it like that! I love that she went for abraxos and saved the thirteen but like I need to see more of her breaking that mould and developing more, y’know? right now she’s feeling kinda 2D because there’s no DEPTH because she’s facing the world like she has no emotions. I want to see the depth. I need the emotions. when she starts breaking through, I’m gonna start to be impressed. I’ve seen a little, I need more.

I want to like her, it seems like everyone loves her which gives me hope, but I’m a character arc girly. I’m a trauma girly. I’m an emotional girly. I need manon to acknowledge her pile of issues and step into what I know she can be. we shall see.

i don’t think they should’ve been together at all, like they make such good friends but the lover energy was not what it needed to be y’know